Redlines desired. I am going revise this piece in a different composition. If you critique me it would help if you stay away from generic terms and visually explain what you mean.
Story After the battle with Beryl, Sailor Moon, Tuxedo Kamen and all the senshi made the decision to erase their memories in hopes that they could return to a normal life and be happy. However, the peace didn't last long and when Sailor Moon returned to fight the new threat, tuxedo kamen assumed a new alter ego ~ the moonlight knight.
In another timeline, Usagi Tsukino has yet to meet her guardians Luna and Artemis but she still is compelled to save the people she loves from danger, so she assumes a new identity ~ Shiroi Knight. Similar to Moonlight Knight. Around this time, Sailor Venus has also partially awakened but she is far away fighting the Dark Agency in England.
Character While in this form, Usagi's personality is drastically different and is very cold, just like Princess Sailor Moon from the live action PGSM series. It is almost like she is an entirely different person. Without assuming this persona, Usagi would be unable to fight all alone due to her clumsiness and childlike habits.
Shiroi is very agile and extremely graceful and shares many attributes Usagi used to have from her past life as the Moon Princess. Like Tuxedo Kamen / Moonlight Knight she carries roses, but they are never fully opened, only closed. Without Mamoru and the knowledge of her past love, her heart is full of confliction, this also might explain some of her more ruthless actions.
Power The weapon she is holding is called the Moon Chakram. Once it lights up all five orb points on the star, it pulses and can release multiple blades of energy. Each blade is curved, resembling the moon and a Scimitar. It can also be used to purify an area or seal demons.
Great AU take on the character but when I first saw it. I instantly though of I dream of Jennie when it used to come on Nick @ Night. Man me think of my great aunt.
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