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Order of Sloan - Barnard #133 Dusty Rose Redux by mishihime Order of Sloan - Barnard #133 Dusty Rose Redux by mishihime
This is B133's old concept art. Please ignore it and check out the new version.

[See the updated art & story for this character.]




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Art, Character & Story © Mishi Hime 2016.
Inspired by Sailor Moon © Naoko Takeuchi & Toei.
Part of Messier-Senshi / OrderOfSloan
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AdrianosArt Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Your linework is clean, as well as your colors. We have a very good sense of form based upon your shading, and the background is simple, it's a part of the story and not distracting! This is very nice work! The only thing I can suggest is perhaps rounding out the toes on her left foot (our right). The end just looks a bit to sharp to me. 
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mishihime Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
Thank you so much for the comment. I will take more care when I draw feet next time. :D
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AdrianosArt Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
You're very welcome. :)
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Pianocanival Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Professional General Artist
Hey :wave:

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First off, I would like to congratulate you for your clean lineart and the correct proportions on anatomy. As well, I really like to note the management of the color, the palette, gradients and hues. You have acquired  a fine taste when creating art and whichever you're doing now, I must say you're going on the right path :thumbsup:

As for my opinion on the image and general things that stand out to me, I would love to see more hues and contrast between highlights, medium tones, dark tones, overtones and shadows. What you're doing is correct for comics and when you have to do a lot of work, but I would love to see some depth in color, studying more of bit and seeing the potential in your works. For example, the purple lines in the socks, when applied the principles of light (in a different layer(s)) should have different hues and tones. 

As for the design. I honestly like it as it is. I would perhaps like it more with an accent of color in the other side of the wheel color. Green would be perhaps a little bit too bold. So maybe, a cyan/blue or a yellow thing, like the gloves of the shoes could have some more impact on the image overall.

Again, as I told before I really like it :) And I want to encourage you to keep on this path. To my standards you're really near from me to fave your work. Keep working hard that you're almost there :ahoy:

Cheers :D
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mishihime Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
I'm working with this character's design and I was actually considering using green for an accent color but I think I will use cyan instead. :p Thank you for the kind words. It really does help. :D
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Pianocanival Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Professional General Artist
Good luck with it :D And my pleasure :thumbsup:
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mishihime Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2016
If you are interested, I would love a quick comment on this character's new design if you have some time. mishihime.deviantart.com/art/O…
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Gnewi Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Great work! I love the lighting and the colors! Her outfit! Awesome job!
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mishihime Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
Thank you! I want to expand upon her outfit a little but I'm very happy with this.
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BlkKnight1007 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
I really like the lighting effect now.
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